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Yasuo Kuwahara and Gordon T. Allred. Kamikaze: A Japanese Pilot's
Own Spectacular Story of the Infamous Suicide Squadrons.
Clearfield, UT: American Legacy Media, 2007. 255p.
Robert M. Hogge
Weber State University
Instead of thinking about Japanese kamikaze pilots stereotypically as fanatics,
how would it be to see one teenage pilot up close and personal? It would be refreshing
to learn that he has a human face, that he is a person like the rest of us with hopes
and fears and dreams. That's what Gordon T. Allred gives us in his reconstruction of
Yasuo Kuwahara's Word War II experiences as a member of one of the infamous suicide
squadrons.
Told both impressionistically and realistically as a first-person narrative, Allred uses
what he calls "creative logic" (xi) to bring Kuwahara's story to life, becoming one with
Kuwahara empathically in the telling. This 50th-anniversary edition of an original story
published in 1957 reveals Allred as a highly skilled writer, one with more than twenty
books to his credit, and one who hopes that this telling has "greater literary quality
than the original" (xii). When I first read this version of Kamikaze, I immediately
sensed literary echoes: Stephen Crane's impressionism, his psychological probing of Henry
Fleming in The Red Badge of Courage; Erich Maria Remarque's tone of ultimate doom,
his portrayal of Paul Baümer, a sensitive and perceptive narrator in All Quiet
on the Western Front; Ernest Hemingway's realistic vignettes, his depiction of a
traumatized Nick Adams in In Our Time; and Tom Wolfe's top-gun celebration of
Chuck Yeager, test pilot and fighter pilot, in The Right Stuff. But Allred's book
is much more than even these literary echoes might suggest. It is a finely crafted story,
but also a mystery fraught with controversy.
In the summer of 1955, Allred was a member of the United States Army stationed at Camp
Kobe, Japan. While there he was introduced to Kuwahara, a twenty-six-year-old Japanese
national working at the camp, a man who claimed he was a kamikaze survivor. Allred, a
freelance writer, asked Kuwahara if he could interview him for a possible magazine article
about his experiences, eighteen months as a trainee and fighter pilot in the Japanese
Army. Kuwahara agreed to tell his story, one that was later "factually" validated by
signed statements from Yoshiro Tsubaki, Kuwahara's commander at both Hiro and Oita, and
from Seiji Hiroi, a fellow pilot. Allred interviewed Kuwahara during their lunch hour
each working day for ten months until Allred's departure from Japan. The immediate
result of these interviews was a magazine article published in the January 1957 issue
of Cavalier, titled "I was a Kamikaze Pilot."
When the article appeared, Allred received an invitation from publisher Ian Ballantine
asking him if he would be interested in expanding the article into a book. Allred agreed
to do so. After reading extensively about Japanese culture, life, and war, Allred drafted
the book, submitted it to several reviewers, including native Japanese, made numerous
revisions, then published Kamikaze with Ballantine as a mass market trade paperback
in late 1957. It quickly became a national best seller, helping Americans temper their
view of the Japanese after World War II. During the next twenty-five years, the book
went through six editions with sales exceeding 500,000. And then gradually the book
went out of print after its last edition in 1982, although it still remains on reading
lists at some libraries, high schools, and colleges worldwide.
In 2000, according to Allred, a Kamikaze movie promoter was doing research in
Onomichi, Kuwahara's home town in Japan, when he met two men who said they were
Kuwahara's high school acquaintances. They claimed that "his account was a fabrication"
(xi). But the allegations surfaced conveniently twenty years after Kuwahara's death in
1980, making it impossible, of course, for him to refute the allegations. To add to
the dilemma, William Gordon and Yuko Shirako, in September 2006, published an article
about the autobiographical Kamikaze titled "Ten Historical Discrepancies," relegating
the book to the category of fiction. But the word fiction itself is problematic. A harsh
definition is that fiction is a lie or, at the very least, a pretense. However, in a more
positive sense, fiction is both imaginative and inventive. And Kuwahara's account has both
of these qualities. It is an impressionistic account of his experiences, more concerned
with human perceptions and feelings than with technical or factual accuracy. Though
Allred is troubled by the allegations made both in 2000 and 2006, he still feels the
story is a true account, but he acknowledges, in a recent interview, "There are undoubtedly
factual errors in Kamikaze."
Yet the debate about the book's factual accuracy actually sidetracks us from a more important
issue: does this popular book, now reconceptualized and expanded by an author sure of his
craft, have literary merit? It certainly does. A line-by-line comparison with an earlier
draft of Chapter 24: The Divine Storm with the version just released shows a wide range
of improvements in word choice and the fuller use of descriptive details. Allred knows
when to discard needless words such as fathomless in "the fathomless skies" (194). He
now has greater appreciation for precision, both in sound and in sense, in his often
syllabic prose when he replaces evaporated with faded in "time itself had faded like
vapor on an immense mirror" (196). But it's his lengthier addition of sensory details
that is most impressive. For example, while Kuwahara is flying in formation, he thinks
about the woman he is in love with. In the clipped and overly sentimental passage from
the earlier draft, Allred writes: "Swift painful glimpses of my past, again of Kyoko.
Wait for me, Kyoko -- wait for me!" Here is the revision:
Swift painful glimpses of my past, my home and family ... of Toyoko. Toyoko embraced in
slumber, Toyoko in her white nightgown with the lacey fringes. Her brow and cheek bones
graced with light, lips touched with their faint entrancing dream smile, impossibly far
away and long ago now, in some lost dimension. (197)
In Kamikaze Allred's Kuwahara lets us see what it's like to be a teenager highly
skilled as a glider pilot, then selected, by personal invitation, for flight training
in the Japanese Army. He describes the brutality of basic training, the thrill of learning
to fly high-performance aircraft, the horror of the atomic blast at Hiroshima. The book
is also about family dynamics and relationships, a chaste but intense love affair,
the conflicting ideologies of National Shintoism and Buddhism -- along with explorations
of honor, obedience, the warrior spirit, patriotism, and the doctrine of expendability.
Is it possible for a seasoned writer to rewrite and expand his first book composed fifty
years ago, imbuing it with greater literary quality, making it even more compelling for
today's post 9/11 readers, both teenagers and adults? Yes, Allred has done just that.
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